Feedback/Revisions

There was a lot of feedback given to me; some of the good feedback was that the layout was good and that my cover was cool. Some of the constructive feedback I received was that my pictures were a bit blurry and to make my text bigger. I agree with most of the feedback, especially about the photos, because I'm not a great photographer.
To revise my magazine I will make the text bigger in my article to get rid of some of the white space. I will also retake some of my photos with a better camera, so that they aren't as blurry.

Uses of Conventions

I wanted to make my table of contents different than most of the table of contents I had seen; so I mixed two of the magazines I researched to create a unique table of contents that is simple yet effective. MY magazine effectively represents dancers in Sarasota and all the events that are happening related to the subject of dance in Sarasota.